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The email viewing pane
One way to grad an email
recipient’s quick attention is to have a list of bullet points of 5-10
lines. No more than these should be
provided as the viewing pane is about this size. This is the idea of presenting information
“above the fold” in a physical letter.
Moreover, more items than this will possibly come across as an over
embellishment. Check out The Gregg Reference Manual http://www.mhhe.com/business/buscom/gregg/
Begin with a good format.
Recommended formats included:
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a) Lower case letters
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b) Make good
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c) List definers
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Check out http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/
When using any of these
lists, lower case letters are best but capitalized letters are acceptable. Just be consistent. Similarly, be consistent with using fragment
or complete sentences. Use proper
punctuation with complete sentences but no with fragments. Too much punctuation is deleterious. [Show email
page views]
Finally, maintain
parallelism, i.e., if starting each item with a verb, keep it that way. Lastly, maintain consistency with first,
second or third person mood.
Other items which are
normally useful within a viewing pane are power words. Industry buzz words (insider shorthand). Your best approach is to echo those words
used in a job description. Whatever you
do, make sure you know the full definition of the buzzwords you are using.
Show two paragraphs – one
with buzzwords and one without
Another item to consider for
the viewing pane is to compliment the company for a significant achievement
such as an Initial Public Offering (IPO), merger, new product or press
release. Follow this with a brief statement
of wanting to be a contributing part of this success.
Populate the viewing window
with power words (go to http://netiquetteiq.blogspot.com/
and click on resources)
When including attachments,
be sure to use the PDF format so that your information will not be able to be
edited.
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In addition to this blog, I have authored the premiere book on Netiquette, "Netiquette IQ - A Comprehensive Guide to Improve, Enhance and Add Power to Your Email". You can view my profile, reviews of the book and content excerpts at:
www.amazon.com/author/paulbabicki
If you would like to listen to experts in all aspects of Netiquette and communication, try my radio show on BlogtalkRadio and an online newsletter via paper.li.I have established Netiquette discussion groups with Linkedin and Yahoo. I am also a member of the International Business Etiquette and Protocol Group and Minding Manners among others. I regularly consult for the Gerson Lehrman Group, a worldwide network of subject matter experts and I have been contributing to the blogs Everything Email and emailmonday . My work has appeared in numerous publications and I have presented to groups such as The Breakfast Club of NJ Rider University and PSG of Mercer County New Jersey.
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In addition to this blog, I have authored the premiere book on Netiquette, "Netiquette IQ - A Comprehensive Guide to Improve, Enhance and Add Power to Your Email". You can view my profile, reviews of the book and content excerpts at:
www.amazon.com/author/paulbabicki
If you would like to listen to experts in all aspects of Netiquette and communication, try my radio show on BlogtalkRadio and an online newsletter via paper.li.I have established Netiquette discussion groups with Linkedin and Yahoo. I am also a member of the International Business Etiquette and Protocol Group and Minding Manners among others. I regularly consult for the Gerson Lehrman Group, a worldwide network of subject matter experts and I have been contributing to the blogs Everything Email and emailmonday . My work has appeared in numerous publications and I have presented to groups such as The Breakfast Club of NJ Rider University and PSG of Mercer County New Jersey.
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